2020年pets1写作范文（16）

假如你是Martin，你的笔友Alice在给你的来信中说她经常生病，情绪低落。请你给她写封回信，告诉她应该怎么做。

要求：

1.80词左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;

2.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息;

3.可根据所给信息做适当发挥;要求条理清楚，语意连贯，字迹工整。

参考词汇：healthy food，do more exercises，enough sleep，keep happy

Dear Alice,

I'm sorry to hear that you are not very well and feel unhappy.________________________________________

Yours,

Martin

Dear Alice,

I'm sorry to hear that you are not very well and feel unhappy. In my opinion, physical state and mental state affect each other and I can suggest some methods to improve your present condition. First of all, you must keep happy. It is reported in some medical magazine that laughing happily three times a day is good for your health. Furthermore, having enough sleep is very necessary. Lack of sleep is said to be one of the causes of bad temper. And then. I suggest you give up junk food and choose healthy food such as fruits vegetables and milk. Last but the most important one is doing exercise on regular basis. You know, physical exercise can make you relaxed and at ease.

I believe you are sure to be a happy and healthy girl if you follow my advice above.

Best wishes! Come on!

Yours,

Martin

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好词佳句

1.I'm sorry to... 很遗憾

2.lack of sleep 缺乏睡眠

3.give up 放弃

4.follow one's advice 采纳某人的建议

5.In my opinion, physical state and mental state affect each other and I can suggest some methods to improve your present condition. 我认为身体状况和情绪是相互影响的，而且我能给你建议一些方法来改善现在的情况。点拨：此句点明身体状况和情绪是相互影响的，并指出小作者要提出建议，为下文的展开做了铺

垫。

6.Last but the most important one is doing exercise on regular basis. 最后但最重要的一点是要经常锻炼身体。

点拨：last but the most important点明这是最重要的一点，放在最后是为了重点突出。

参考样文

Dear Alice,

I'm sorry to hear that you are not very well and feel unhappy. Here is my advice about how to keep healthy. A balanced diet can help you to keep in good health. You'd better eat more healthy food. It's good for you to eat a lot of vegetables, fruit(s) and drink milk every day. And you should do more exercise, such as playing ball games, running, swimming and so on. Good food and exercise will be helpful. You also need enough sleep. It's really important. What's more, keep yourself happy. Try to smile every day. I hope you will be better and enjoy your life.

Yours,

Martin

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