2020年pets1写作范文（18）

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Skin-diving is a new sport today. This sport takes you into a wonderful new world. It is like a visit to the moon. When you are under the water, it is easy for you to climb big rocks, because you are no longer heavy. Here, under water, everything is blue and green. During the day, there is plenty of light. When fish swim nearby, you can catch them with your hands.When you have tanks of air on your back. you can stay in deep water for a long time. But you must be careful when you dive in deep water.skin-diving是一种新的运动项目，假如你是一名轻装潜水馆里的工作人员，请你用80字左右的发言稿向人们介绍轻装潜水的情况。

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Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to our Skin-diving Club. As a new sport, skin-diving is very exciting, when you dive, you will enjoy a wonderful new world. There you will find it easy to climb a big rock, because you are no longer heavy.

Besides, when under the water, you will find everything is blue and green. Staying in deep water for a long time with tanks of air on your back,you can catch fish easily with your hands. As you know, catching fish is one of the most interesting parts of this sport.

What's more, there are more uses for skin-diving like cleaning ships without taking them out of water.

Enjoy yourselves and be careful!

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在认真阅读原文的基础上作者对文中的重要信息进行了提炼，有选择性地进行改写。文章不求面面俱到，而是有侧重的描写，从而提高了表达的效果。asa new sport，besides，as you know，what's more等过渡词语的选用使全文层次清晰，浑然一体，结构十分严谨。动词-ing形式作状语、作主语的正确使用使文章更上了一个档次，使文章更显文采斐然。

好词佳句1.enjoy a wonderful new word 享受精彩的新世界，考生如果怕自己错过考试报名时间和考试时间的话，可以 免费预约短信提醒，届时会以短信的方式提醒大家报名和考试时间。

2.no longer 不再……

3.enjoy oneself 玩得开心

4.There you will find it easy to climb a big rock because you are no longer heavy. 在那你会发现攀爬一块巨大的岩石很容易，因为你的身体不再那么沉重了。

点拨：easy to和no longer解释了在水下行动便捷的原因，让读者恍然大悟。

5.Enjoy yourselves and be careful! 祝大家玩得愉快并注意安全!

点拨：结尾不仅祝愿大家玩得愉快，同时也提出注意安全的警告，起到强调的作用。

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Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to our Skin-diving Club. Skin-diving is a new sport today. It is very exciting. It will take you into a wonderful new world. If you are under the water, you will find it easy to climb a big rock, because you are no longer heavy.

When you are under the water, you will find everything is blue and green. You can stay in deep water for a long time with tanks of air on your back, and you can catch fish easily with your hands.

Catching fish is one of the most interesting parts of this sport. Besides, there are more uses for skin-diving. So skin-diving is also a very interesting sport.

Enjoy yourselves and be careful!

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