【摘要】雅思写作一直是中国考生的一个短板,考生们在考试过程中会遇到各种各样的问题,其中一些考生比较苦恼怎样能把结尾写得精彩。虽说好的开头是成功的一半,但是漂亮的收尾做得好也能增加成功几率。备考雅思写作考试一样,开头与结尾非常重要。希望通过下面对雅思精彩结尾的实例点评,可以提供给考生们一些写作思路,增加取得高分的胜算。
应该说,中英文在议论文的结尾,还是有些微妙的差别的。环球网校小编提醒考生不能忽视作文结尾,雅思作文的结尾往往比开头和主题句还要重要,最起码应避免明显中式表达的痕迹,不必喊口号或者抒情。总的原则是:可以重申全文要点,可以提出具体措施,再加上地道,至少是书面语的措辞,就是一个好的雅思作文结尾!
请看这么一道题及其结尾:
Wild animals have no place in the 21st century. Some people think that preventing these wild animals from dying out is a waste of resource. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
结尾1:
Someone said safeguard of wild animals is a waste of resource, but I do not agree. It seems we would spend some time, wealth and manpower on this meaningless thing. Actually we also do this for human being ourselves. Let’s protect wild animals right now.
环球网校雅思名师评:结尾第一句话,是对于考官给出的观点的转述,应放在文章开头就出现。结尾不是申明中心句,而应是对全文观点的总结。大作文要收的坚定有力,seems让文章显得说服力不足,meaningless跟全文观点相孛。最后一句有喊口号的意味,不符合英语议论文的习惯,同样的意思可改换客观平实的文风收尾。