【摘要】雅思写作一直是中国考生的一个短板，考生们会遇到各种各样的问题。想要取得雅思写作高分，开头段的写作不容忽视，写得好无疑锦上添花，写的不好当然会被扣分。希望通过下面对雅思写作九大失败开篇的分析，考生们可以从中吸取些教训，避免在自己的写作中出现。
“见官死”开头之中式英文，人见人晕
典型失败案例：
Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life
In our life，there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……
Topic 2- The population problem
The population problem is a very big problem. For example，in the city centers of Shanghai，we can always see people mountain people sea there.
Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?
I think in today’s society，there is no fairness in the business world. For example，I always chopped when I go out buy things……
Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things，he will get “baoying”.
