2019年剑桥商务英语中级写作范文（14）

WHAT IS IMPORTANT WHEN ……?

Aiming for promotion

*Quality of performance

*Company loyalty

【词汇&短语】

由……负责 be in charge of 热情的 enthusiastic

重要的， 关键的 crucial 细小的工作 small errands

长期的 long-range 价值 merit

管理的 administrative 监督 supervise

【句型点击】

That is to say…..

It is very crucial to……

…..is known to all

【参考范例】

If you are aiming for a promotion, primarily, you should show a satisfactory performance. That is to say, if you want to be in charge of something, you start from small errands and show your long-range merits. You have to show people what you are capable of. This is very crucial. Secondly, demonstrate your loyalty to the company, because no manager wants an outstanding but undependable to take an administrative role and supervise a department. Thirdly, show your intelligence in the field you are working, face to the challenge that others fear to take, and then, your professional skills would be known to all. The last point, try to build an easy-going and enthusiastic personality. A brilliant yet not welcomed employee is definitely not qualified for a promotion.