2019年剑桥商务英语中级写作范文（13）

WHAT IS IMPORTANT WHEN ……?

Choosing transport for a business trip

* Convenience

* Cost-effectiveness

【词汇&短语】

一揽子交易 package deal 出发时间 departure time

优待票excursion pass 途中转机、转车 stop over

宾馆预订 hotel reservation 晚点 delay

【句型点击】

……other things being equal 同等条件下

It is not uncommon to …. 很常见

…… to seal the deal with 与…..谈妥某事

…… without any doubt….

【参考范例】

When choosing a transport for a business trip, convenience should come first. I mean, other things being equal, you should choose the one that takes your minimal effort. In business world, time is money. You don’t want delayed departure time or unexpected stop-over on the way. At the same time, it is not uncommon to refund a ticket or change a one-way ticket to a round trip ticket, if the transportation company can deal with these things effectively, undoubtedly we will choose it. Secondly, cost-effectiveness is also important. If a transportation company can offer us excursion pass, why not make it our choice? Thirdly, the quality of the transportation should also be concerned. A good rest during the trip can make you in a good shape to seal the deal with your business partners. Lastly, if the transporter can offer some package deal such as hotel reservation, it would be a wise choice.